Kept - I've Become His Dirty Little Secret (2013) - Plot & Excerpts
Another hot teaser that I found entertaining until . . . the scene with James, Daniels, Sarah, and Casey. How is it humanly possible for them to be in the positions and capable of doing what was described?! I felt snatched out of the story because that made no sense and I kept trying to make sense of it. There also seemed to be two different storylines going and neither were really explained. I know I won't read the rest in this series. I would've preferred a complete, well developed book rather than little snippets. However, this was fine for something to kill a few minutes of down time. I enjoyed parts of this very short story, however I doubt I will pay the price for the next two installments as they are even shorter. Not enough pages for a pricey $2.99 each. The three volumes are only 40 some pages total. I am also a stickler for details and this author needs to pay a little more attention to detail in order for the scenes to be even slightly believable. If you are going to write a steamy scene, at least make sure you have put the players in a physical position that would make said activity even possible.
What do You think about Kept - I've Become His Dirty Little Secret (2013)?
uhhh wow. Quick light read to get the mood going. Fairly good story.
—jrancher
Short and sweet little hot menege read
—AthenaFleur
