This is a very....interesting story, because once again I was tricked by that strange anachronistic feeling that sometimes permeates throughout Josh Lanyon's stories. In this one, I thought the whole thing happened in 70s until I saw the word "eHarmony".....As for the "one fella tried to throttle the other fella to death because the other fella kicked him out of the closet" thing, that really doesn't bother me at all. This short story reads like the penultimate or even final chapter of a novel and should it have been me, I wouldn`t have published. Rather I`d have stored it away and written the previous chapters at a later date. From this chapter one can tell by the hints during the story`s conclusion, that this would have made a great novel.Nice little story. Didn`t enjoy the sex scene. Less graphic for me. I have an imagination.
I'm always amazed by how much Josh can pack into a short story. This was another great one for me.
—RickyMario7
3 stars a good quick read. I like this but I wish, it would be a little bit longer :)
—teejay_doll
A nice short story. I would be interested to see these characters in a longer work.
—Ireadabookbrooke
3.5*
—kEsha
