Overly dramatic with useless subplots, sub par characters and shitty dialogue.Marcus was an overgrown baby. I don't know what the author wanted us to like about him. As far as I could tell he was a jerk, an ass and in perpetual denial.Avery was an over dramatic freak of a heroin. She was the ultimate Mary Sue and more than once I wanted to just kill her.I wanted so much to like this story. The premise of a girl dressing up as a guy never gets old; I mean LOOK at She's the Man and Babe in Boyland! But this? This was so shitty I wanted to gouge my eyes out. First off the plot was bleugh, the characters were flimsy and had no potential, there was no character development and the whole process was so WARPED it pissed me off. The pace was horrible, everybody was bowing down to Avery because she was so “speshul”. And then there was the INSTA! Love! I didn't get Avery and Marcus's relationship AT ALL! Ugh. Plus the age difference was disgusting. i loved the idea of this story. even if it was a little unbelievable in parts and Avery was treated like a girl for most of the book. the story itself i found interesting enough though and the main thing that let it down was simply the fact that the story was told by at least 8 characters (conservative guess) switching between viewpoints multiple times without any warning, sometimes to the most random of minor characters. this not only was confusing but destroyed any mystery in the book because we always knew what every character was thinking.
What do You think about I'm A Celebrity Love Me (2000)?
Such a Wicked Awesome Story!! Cannot wait to read the second one :)
—Steph
