Read Series: Everville

Book

The First Pillar (2013)

Despite what some readers on Amazon think, this book seems very much in its infancy. It's as though the author finished the first draft and sent it online, instead of going over the story again and getting it properly edited.There are numerous misspellings and sentence structure errors.The story ...

Book

Everville: The First Pillar (2013)

I'm not going to give this a star rating since I didn't even make it through the first chapter. The writing is just bad. Sentences that are so simple they sound stilted, words and phrases used incorrectly, no information in the first chapter about who the main character even is, and adverbs galor...